tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6062248790514053091.post8976458458387467166..comments2021-07-16T02:03:58.304-04:00Comments on Round Flat Rocks: CreasesJeff Aukerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13040330884223626237noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6062248790514053091.post-71470419145534022102009-04-21T07:49:00.000-04:002009-04-21T07:49:00.000-04:00the love is noted and appreciated. my ability to s...the love is noted and appreciated. my ability to sustain a metaphor is...not strong. will work on that...promise. enjoy the summery flavors of the city by the bay...Jeff Aukerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13040330884223626237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6062248790514053091.post-77334286676064209032009-04-21T00:34:00.000-04:002009-04-21T00:34:00.000-04:00You know there is nothing but love coming to you f...You know there is nothing but love coming to you from an old friend, but a bit of what I hope is seen as constructive criticism here.<br /><br />I can tell this is leading to an insightful realization or discovery. However, there is a beauty to being able to follow something this short without confusion. You KNOW that between UCLA's philosophy department, English department, German and Latin departments; law school; and international studies abroad, I've dealt with complex. I had a bit of trouble following.<br /><br />It gets me to a wonderful place, but it's a zig-zag of imagery and thoughts clash rather than compliment (and I understand the clash is what brings up the discovery). However, I do GET it. I would just ask you to distill it a bit.<br /><br />Nothing but adoration, sandwiched between bits of snarkiness, from a summery San Francisco ;)Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09024832959937205245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6062248790514053091.post-27677487381650165602009-04-20T23:50:00.000-04:002009-04-20T23:50:00.000-04:00beautiful.beautiful.Holly Clarknoreply@blogger.com